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Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Essay 3


Eng 1010

Summer 2012


Essay  3

Laurie  Elise  Garvin
The  state  of  education  today



After  reading  several  essays  I  have  found  that  ther  is  alot of  misinformation. 

Most  educators  are  not  bored  to  the  point  that  many are  falling  asleep  ,which  is  an  untruth..

  The   goals and condition of public education  is  fine  except  we  have  turned  into  a  testing  mentality. Students  learn  at  differet  rates and  should  not  be  tested  often.
    My  information  comes  directly  from an  educator  by  the  name  of  Andrea S  who  teaches  string  education  to  elementary  stududents,  She  must  pull  the  students  out  of  class  to  give  them  lessons.

Andrea  evaluatiion  was  not  great  in  Sept  and  cannot  wait  to  chat,if  she cares  to  share.









  1. Your Research: after you have chosen your topic and narrowed it down as

much as possible, construct your argument in the form of a question; for example: is gay marriage something that morally and economically threatens our society, or should it be considered a right granted to all members of a democracy? Remember to look at both sides of the issue when forming your question. Next, you need to do your research in order to answer the question you have posed. You’ll want to start with Conversations because all of the topics I’ve offered above are touched upon in your textbook; however, you will also be required to do a small amount of outside research in order to make sure your argument is well-rounded. When it comes to outside sources, remember to be creative: you can use info from traditional sources like books and periodicals, but you may also want to conduct your own surveys, use songs and movies as sources, or even interview people who are experts on your topic. Whatever methods you choose to employ, you must have at least 5 sources for your Works Cited page at the end of your paper (you may have more, but 5 sources is the minimum requirement; 2 of those sources can come from Conversations but they don’t have to. If you’re able to find all of your information outside of the textbook, that’s fine.).



  1. Your Argument: you’ve gathered your research, read your information, talked to people, and now you’re ready to put your ideas and arguments down on paper. The structure for this essay is the same as all the others; it’s just been expanded a bit to encompass the research that you’re doing. Your paper should be from 5-7 pages long, and it should look something like this:

** introduction and thesis paragraph

** history of your issue

** opposing arguments

** your arguments

** solutions / suggestions

** conclusion

** Works Cited Page



  1. The Due Date: you will have a full two weeks in which to complete this assignment, but don’t let that large amount of time fool you. You cannot wait until the last minute and expect to get a good grade on this paper; it just won’t happen. So here is a schedule of dates for you to keep in mind so that you can pace yourself in the research and writing of this paper:

7/3: handout on written response and discussion of the research

question

7/5: research question due; discussion on research and structure

7/10 and 7/12: the Works Cited page

7/17: Essay #3 due



If you have any questions or problems during the course of this assignment, please feel free to see me. Have fun learning about the issue of your choice. I look forward to reading these papers.

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